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I'm turning these 2 poems in tomorrow WED / 052709 / 10:22pm The poems I have been writing have been inspired by William Blake. Songs of Innocence & Songs of Experience. Little Girl by Shaneen She wears bright pink and yellow every time she is out, Running through the flower fields, pulling petals, but losing count Flowing hither and thither like her mother�s cursive, Rosy cheeks, civilized, and carefree, with no motive. Angelic and impeccably untainted since her short existence, She is oblivious; the real world is no more than a few hours in distance. Years away from strength in struggle, She will soon feel so much trouble. She is pure, authentically overflowed with blissful glee, I wonder if she will exist with the facts of reality. Do you feel innocence in this? Old Woman by Shaneen She wears old patterns, long dresses, and comfy shoes Attempting to pick a fight at bingo, win or lose Slacking to and fro like a child�s penmanship Truthfully qualified in the mind of hardship Homely, yet imperfectly decomposed Corrupt memories of being hardnosed Conjointly hitting walls and getting scars Delicately ample of fiber bars She is mixed, weary hearted and left astray I wonder if she can take another day Do you feel the experience in this? I tried to make the two poems coincide, opposing each other. Can you guys recognize the difference? & tell me what you think, please! :] Comment! (2) | Recommend! I presented this poem in class today. TUES / 052609 / 6:15pm Confessions of a Teenage Heartache by Shaneen Confessions of a teenage heartache. This is truly more than I can take. I�m head over heels, tripping over my own feet And the puzzled look on my face still isn�t complete. It�s a whirlwind of emotions that I can�t fight. Motionless strength calls upon me to hold on tight. Pain is inevitable but suffering is optional, Though my weak repulsive mindset is annual. He�s on the other side of the unbreakable glass But my unyielding desire wishes to trespass. It isn�t hard to see why you keep me captive You are unaware that my love for you is massive. Wishing I was inclined to an unrelated matter, I cannot deny this prolonged sickness; Only to realize that the glass will never shatter. Pretty good? Comment! (4) | Recommend! You can be alone, but never lonely. FRI / 052209 / 4:40pm Comment! (3) | Recommend! Just a random thought. MON / 040909 / 9:40pm My ex boyfriend; I loved him as one can never love twice. I just wanted to let the world know. Comment! (6) | Recommend! (1) |
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