the way you walk
the way you talk
i notice your every move,
but you dont notice me.
you dont even look at me.
so what should i do?
to make you notice that i truly care
that i m not cold, that for you i would go anywhere.
its true i do love you,
and i wish that you would love me too.
if only you would have had the chance to know me,
you would have care for me,
maybe even love me.
but i must accept reality,
and know that unfortunately,
this wont come to be.
but even so your love is what i will always desire
because you are still burning in my mind and heart
stronger than any fire.
but you dont notice me
because you dont even care.
so i lay on my bed all alone
crying in despair. -luis rosario-
(what do u guys think is it any good?)
I think its' beautiful. I like the question, ' so what should I do', mostly.. I can relate to that poem, but not with the next line, about being cold, 'cause I was cold to my poem-girl, and I'd give anything to take the pain Icaused her in retalliation to what she did to me back.
BUT, I do really like the poem.
» Dilated on 2005-08-25 08:11:49
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