hey pplz! i worte a song and i am goona type it too bad there won't be any music!!!! so if you can just imagine the music beeing there! but any wayz i hope you like it! Unique written and thought of by: heather lane I am not like you and I am so tired o this lie you want me to live, it just isn't me. sometimes you make me feel unique and that makes me feel oh so special. pight nowI just need to crack open and let the real me shine through. yes, that means not beeing exactly like you. i just want to break free and say: chorus: i am unique but you can't see that because too blind to see that i am nothing yes i man nothing like you but is the only way i can get through to you. why do i feel so powerless? i feel like i can't live the life that i dreamed of. i feel as if you are the cause of my pain and it hurts me yes it hurts me so bad that you, the person i trusted would manipulte me to be just like you. chorus just stop it you are hurting me. i am unique why can't you just see, see the good heart i have in me? it's like you don't trust me beeing who i really am. but just trust me for i know myself and i know that i am unique. chorus i am unique why can't you see? i just want to be myself. ending: let me break free! ~thanx for litsneing to my boreing song!!! hope you like!~ ~~~ Heather ~~~

Great!
Whoa! thats really good! mayb u can bcome a famouse song writter one day! keep up the good work!
» StuckOnYou on 2004-08-04 01:14:51

I like it...
it's just I don't know what you're thinking of. You know, how you want the tune to be. When I was imagining it . . . I was thinking Ashlee Simpson or another girl who's into punk and punk rock. I don't know.
Anyway, I think you know this but I'm just writing just in case. Near the bottom you write "chorus just stop it you are hurting me. i am unique why can't you just see" I think that the part that's "Just stop it you are hurting me" might be the pre-chorus or something and that "I am unique" is the chorus because I think the chorus has to stay the same. You might've known that, but I just wanted to make sure. Also, near the end "I just want to be myself. Let me break free!" I think there should be more. I really don't know your view in the song, but to me and the way I was thinking, there should be more.

But I really like the song! Good job!

» Ajibalaji89 on 2004-08-04 02:00:28

oh and the pre-chorus thingy..i think 'm watching too much mtv =D
» Ajibalaji89 on 2004-08-04 02:03:51

:) !!!!
heather that was sooo awsum!!! omg that is soo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay go heather *w00t w00t*
by the way, to make ur entries go like this:
bla bla bla this is my entry
i like salad!
Luv Always,
Heather
All you have to do is do is the arrow things and BR!! i will type it in ur chat box!
» ieatsharpobjects on 2004-08-04 07:58:48

haha jeeze aji. change this and this and this but i liked it! ahaha that makes me laugh. i liked it though it's really cool.
» 2%milk on 2004-08-17 11:07:20

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