mood: anxious

heres a little sumthing i wrote, its called haunting visions, i didnt want to put it under the writing stuff...oh rite, b4 i 4get im going to be sectioning it off like i did with LOST...anyways here it is:

three teenagers walked to the door, they were all anxious, they all wanted to know the same thing. was the house haunted? the three--cole, trent, and manda werent sure what they were getting themselves into. one by one they walked in single file to the front of the house. it was boarded up. one of the boys, cole, looked up and pointed out thta one of the windows was opened. he told them that there was a curtain blowing in the breeze. they just ignored him and continued to the door.

the first to arrive at the door was cole. he was the tallest of the three. he turned around, just as he reached the door. when he did, the other two were gone. he thought they had chickened out, but when he opened hte door, one of them was sitting on a chair to the right, next to the window.

he walked closer and found that it was his best friend, manda. her head was resting on her chest. her hair covering her face, he thought she was asleep. when he tilted her head he found her face was wet and sticky. he wanted to know what was on her face; he walked to the window, and found that the boards were loose. after tearing them down, he faced her again and found that it wsa blood. she was tied to the chair. her wrists were red from struggling. he looked at her face and saw she had a long cut from the top of her forehead down to her cheek. her eyes had been cut out with a foreign object and the muscles which attached them had not been cut, causing the eye balls to dangle like two swollen fishing luers (sp?) waiting for a bite; the blood was seeping out of the empty sockets that resembled a bottle top paring out delicious red wine.

cole didnt want to be in that same room with manda's mangled and mutilated body. he stumbled off toward the kitchen. there he found the other boy, trent. there was plenty of light, but he didnt look at the boy; his attention was on a fish bowl sitting on the counter. it was filled with red water, and something finger-like was sinking to the bottom of the bowl. he turned around, figuring that it was a finger. he looked at the dangling body, he didnt look as bad as the girl, besides the fact that he was hanged. he looked more closely at the body; he finally saw it--the other boy's missing finger. his hand was completely mutilated. cole backed away from the kitchen, at the same time, wandering what happened to the rest of his friend's hand.

cole ran out of the kitchen, and out the front door. he was appaled to find his friends standing outside. he told them what happened, but not what happpened to them. he didnt want them to think he was making things up so they wouldnt have to go in. manda told him that he was only standing and staring at the door. she said that he was in a trance.

after a while, they went inside, there sat a chair placed in the spot manda was found. cole didnt say anything. manda was last to enter. she turned again; the room was filled with furniture, and an aroma of spaghetti penetrated the whole house. music she had never heard of before was playing. she wasnt sure where it came from. in the corner of her right eye, she noticed a television on, no one watching. she walked towards it to turn it off. when she walked around the sofa, she found someone lying on the floor face down.

"hello?" manda said. the body did not move, it only lay there. again she called out to it, still no response. she squatted down, leaned forward, stretched forward, stretched her arm out to turn the body over.

she screamed; the whole house echoed with her scream. she couldnt believe what she saw. the body's face had been carved out. all that was left was the skull. she noticed the brain and eyes scooped perfectly out. the skeleton's face lay smiling up at her. she stumbled backwards and knocked down a chair.

footsteps came running down the stairs, a frightened litte girl ran to the body, completely ignoring the other girl.

"sissy! my poor, poor sister, what happened?" she started to cry. she turned towards the other girl looking straight at her. the little girl turned once more towards her sister. manda looked down, and the body was gone; she looked back up, and the room was empty. she found the other two boys at the bottom of the stairs looking at her.

she told them what happened, and what she saw. they couldnt understand what she said, because she was crying at the same time. after calming down, she told her story, and then she started to cry again.

they headed upstairs. they came to a long dark hallway. it seemed to them that it went on forever. trent walked ahead, while cold comforted manda. trent could hear her crying. it sounded like she was crying in his ear. it became quieter. he turned around to see if she had stopped. he found nobody there.

behind him footsteps could be heard coming closer and closer. they were faint at first; the boy was too preoccupied wondering where his friends might have gone. when he finally turned around to continue down the hall to look for his friends, he was hit hard on the back of his head. the last thing he saw was a little girl, a little further down the hall.

when he awoke, he was in a room that smelled like incense of the kind he could not distinguish. candles surrounded the chair he sat in. he looked around. nothing was in the room, save himself, the chair, and the candles.

someone was coming towards the door, he held his breath, hoping it was a friendly face. the door slowly opened, a silhouette stood in the doorway. it walked into the candle-lit room. it was the little girl he saw in the hallway, and thte same little girl who had run down the stairs to her dead sister's side. she looked at him; her face was stained with tears and blood. whose, he didnt want to know. she came closer. in her hands she held a pair of scissors. she walked walked behind him and cut the ropes that had been cutting off his circulation. she then cut the ropes that tied his legs to the chair. he stood up. when he looked at the girl, about to thank her, she was already running out the door. he called for her to wait.

when trent walked out of the room, he found the hallway empty. he looked to his left, and no one was there; looked to his right and found his friends looking at him. he turned around to get a better look at the room he had been in and found that there was no door, but a wall.


ok thats the end of part one, hope u guys liked that...sumtime soon, im going to post part two..this weekend im going to be working on part four..

Hey
that was pretty good, I thought the little girl was going to get him with the scissors for a minute. let me know when you post part two, i hate cliffhangers. later.
» Stiletto on 2004-11-10 12:15:23

YEA
i like the story, could u tell me when pt 2 is here
» seewun on 2004-11-10 05:07:00

groooovey
groovey story man ::insert stupid smirk here::
» baaaah on 2004-11-11 10:37:06

HAHA. Yeah, shurr ill try to help yoo. Do yoo have photoshop? if yoo dunt, yoo dunt have to make a layout. Yoo can juss go to a site where therr are pre-made layouts.. buh yoo kinda have to fix & play around w/them cuz it won't fit right into the page. & yeah... hahaha. Buh, the layout was pre-made. I kinda mixed ett around a little & made ett as beautiful as it can be =]. xoxo, Sha~Sha

» Seksi_Beest on 2004-11-12 05:40:33

Oh, i can give yoo a site for the pre-made layouts yoo can go to. Cuz i kinda can't make much layouts anymore cuz i onlee had a free trial on photoshop for 30 days. Im not shurr if i can download ett agen.. =[ I want ett back... xoxo

» Seksi_Beest on 2004-11-12 05:42:39

Yeah// heres the site: blogskins.com & click on browse.. or some of the layout names on the right hand side. Buh whos, him? xoxo

» Seksi_Beest on 2004-11-12 08:13:33

oh yeah.. i noe him. Haha. nice layout gerrll. did yoo use the site that i gave yoo or no? NICE. *clap, clap, clap* xoxo

» Seksi_Beest on 2004-11-12 09:46:39

YOUR WELCOME =]. Yoo may always use that site whenever okay? hahahaha. that site is tha bomb. ett encourages mee to make a new layout. lol. nice layout by the way. ;) xoxo

» Sha_Sha on 2004-11-13 05:34:06

its for pre-made layouts. yoo can also make your own buh yoo haveta sign upp. There are other places where yoo can get help or instructions from. Like these 2 sites: createblog.com & blogring. Buh these sites are usually made for xanga (yuck) buh yoo can click on blogger scripts or blogger skins. Blogring is most used for xanga--i usually onlee use it for blogger scripts. xoxo

» Sha_Sha on 2004-11-15 08:04:25

oh, thats blogring.net

» Sha_Sha on 2004-11-15 08:05:48

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