This weekend was pretty boring. Yesterday I didn't do anything other then lay around, watch tv, and do homework. Yes, I actually did my homework. I even started writing a story. I haven't gotten much, but I'm gonna be adding more on tonight when I get off. So.... here's just the first bit that I have. It might not be the greatest thing in the world, but it's what I felt like writting.

She was terrified of going to school the next day, because she knew what she had done, and she knew it was wrong. Her fears built up inside, as she sat cradling her crimson drenched arm. The seering pain suddenly hit again, as the blood returned. She didn't want to resort to her cravings, but Alexandria couldn't handle the pain any more. The fuse on her internal bomb ran short. And she just exploded.

Sawing away at her arm she could feel her flesh tearing. Layer by layer. And her pain was eased as the blood came. Appearing from beneath the blade. She tore at her skin viciously. Again and again, until her entire arm was engulfed in a shimmering crimson. When all was emptied of hate and her frustration was gone. Alex sat in the middle of the room, and cried as the carpet around her turned from white to a bright puddling crimson.

A sudden 'ring' shattered the silence filled with tears and barely existant sobs. Slowly Alex pulled herself to the phone. She picked up the phone and brought herself to a whispered "hello?"
"Hey Al." It was Bobby,"How're ya?"
"I'm fine I guess. Why?"
"Okay, what's wrong? He's there again isn't he?"
"Uh..." Alex peered through the blinds out the window. "Uh, yeah he is."
"Alright, I'll be over soon."
"No! Bobby wait!"

It was too late, he had already hung up.

Well, that's it for now. What do ya think? Should I keep writing or is is not worth working on still? Please comment! Love, Monkey

keep writing
» yoshibby on 2004-12-13 09:07:51

r u stupid? jk
of course you should keep rittin it. its realli good.
» sexybebe72914 on 2004-12-13 05:08:36

I can't take the shir my mom is doing anymore. I sware if she keeps this up... She lied to my chorus teacher, icouldn't hold it in and cried in the chorus office. Through all of the arguments and lieing.. I can't friggen take it anymore.
» Broken_Inside on 2004-12-13 05:20:20

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