Dalam sejenak waktu itu;
hati terbelenggu
minda terganggu
dan denyut jantung bergerak laju.
Dalam sedetik masa itu;
jiwa meronta
badan merana
dan fikiran hilang entah ke mana
Ingin ku lontarkan suara,
biar di dengari semua;
Ingin ku beritahu dunia,
dan setiap benda yang bernyawa,
betapa masa mencemburui kita...
Betapa...
Bila ku toleh pandang ke belakang,
Bila ku renung jauh berbalam,
Ku lihat kau yang makin menghilang....
Betapa...
berat kaki ku melangkah, dan kalut jerit ku bertingkah...
kau tetap hilang dan berpulang,
dan aku...
terus mengejar bebayang!

10.40pm, 11/4/2003
somewhere long time ago...

hm...
deep meaning...

so are you still chasing after shadows and is the girl still lost in her own world?

I hope things will get better for you. :-)
» siti84 on 2006-09-06 11:12:50

thanks...
this happen to be the last piece i ever write... used to write whole bunch of this before... nway how come u say its a gal?? :P
» Galaxie on 2006-09-06 11:21:54

hm...
well, its just a guess. coz u said that you want to shout to the whole world how time is short. and when you look behind, you saw her drifting away. you want to chase after her but your steps are heavy and all you get to chase is just shadows...

Is it right? hm. I am guessing its about a girl but I may be wrong. My malay literature is not that good anyway.
» siti84 on 2006-09-07 12:25:45

Wow... never tought any ppl will really goin to read line by line.. :)
thanks nway... u can say so...i dun even remember why... :P but i taught i'm writing something bout being left behind by frens... :?? haha... but thats another whole chapter i dun think i wanna talk... nway thanks for such in depth view... Wow :)
» Galaxie on 2006-09-07 01:40:20

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