Sunday. 10.23.05 4:02 am
What is love if not but a whisper in everything you do?
I saw you today as I stood there reading,
I watched your form and movement and expressions.
I inhaled your scent and listened to the littlest sounds that escaped your lips.
It was not possible to concentrate with you there but I pretended to.
I wondered why I could not breathe.
I wondered of the pretense of love.
I wondered of the line between love and fascination.
I stood there today watching you read; but today I stood alone.
who's the pic of?
» theZEBRA on 2005-10-23 05:25:21
I await that day when you write about the happiness of being with the one you love. For now though, i really like this poem. you can really feel how sad this guy feels. the twist of watching someone but yet who isn't there... it's beautiful ... the best poem i've read so far!!
» justme (58.164.179.65) on 2005-10-23 08:10:02
I await that day when you write about the happiness of being with the one you love. For now though, i really like this poem. you can really feel how sad this guy feels. the twist of watching someone but yet who isn't there... it's beautiful ... the best poem i've read so far!!
» justme (58.164.179.65) on 2005-10-23 08:27:54
hey mate, sad poem... but i hope it isn't a state ur in at the moment, if it is... better do something about it... u have, after all, been alone for quite a while....
» theDoctor (202.188.183.46) on 2005-10-23 11:46:47
Ah, ever the poet, spouting soft sad lullabies to induce sweet sorrowful sleep. Take care that nightly dreams do not replace the deeds of day.
» Zanzibar on 2005-10-23 03:13:09
Mm. It's not really my place, I don't think, but don't let melancholy paint too much of your poetry. I've found that once I get used to writing about a subject a lot, it feels really difficult when I attempt to write something else.
» DarkDragonKnight on 2005-10-23 03:30:23
dear darkdragonknight,
You are absolutely rite. But since the end of June my mind has been one tracked. I suppose I will have to wait for something more significant to come about. But rite now all I think about is love, lost, pain and sadness. And just for the record you did not overstep any lines. So please continue for even when you tactfulness is replaced with condescending tones it will still be received warmly.
» CONDESCENDme on 2005-10-23 11:01:31
wt... my nicj name is sakaib0y not akaib0y...ai... life.....wahahahaha!
» sakaiboy (219.93.98.78) on 2005-10-23 11:20:24
i could imagine slitting my wrists just reading it..awesome poem dude..who's the chick?
» qerz (222.152.213.193) on 2005-10-24 03:48:50
i have no idea who the lady is just liked it
» CONDESCENDme on 2005-10-24 04:17:55
woah~ u seem to be in deep shit, mate... nevertheless, it showed how much u feel towards that someone.. and i think she must be grateful for having someone to love her that way... if she doesn't, kill her.. anyways, love is alot of possibilities.. so open ur heart.. u might stumble into a diff side of the sky...
» dadumbo (218.208.194.56) on 2005-10-24 04:30:05
dear one with big ears love is to strong a word to be used directly i prefer the word like in such a context
» CONDESCENDme on 2005-10-24 04:41:56
don't blame her for using the word love... it does sounds like a "love" poem to me...
» Don (58.164.179.65) on 2005-10-24 08:28:50
dear don hahaha it is but the poor sod is confused
» CONDESCENDme on 2005-10-24 10:47:37
'Twas beautiful. Makes me wanna' write again..
I haven't written nothing for awhile because I haven't had much to say.
» Dilated on 2005-10-25 09:47:55
uhh . . . thanks for the interesting comment you left on my blog. i like sushi. ;)
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you know yet you feel nothing....
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