Wednesday. 10.19.05 10:45 am
Dear Emily
You are my mould, my form.
You are the base of my concepts.
You give me strength beyond life,
And are the guide to my direction.
You are the bearer of my wit,
And the structure of my character.
You are the focus of my ideals,
The dept of my dept.
Could I ever begin to repay the priceless?
Could respond to uncontestable love?
For you offer only your completeness.
And it is your completeness that makes me whole.
Word of my words, Song of my songs.
Giver of my breath, lover of my soul.
You are my wholeness; my Emily.
Nice poem How 'bout adding this somewhere?...
Your are the balls to my scrotum,
The wipe to my ass...
Romantic shit, huh?
» DeeVeuS on 2005-10-19 10:49:53
A different tone to your usual writings... very light... it's nice...
» justme (58.164.179.65) on 2005-10-20 06:35:52
Dearest Deeveus
Very poetic, but due the inconsistency in sentence structure I’ll have to pass. Thanks for the input though. Will definitely keep it in mind for future reference.
» CONDESCENDme on 2005-10-20 12:27:13
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