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Critique the first chapter of my book?
Saturday. 2.23.13 2:38 pm
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I still can't believe that people at Harvard say things like, "prestige matters" and "you want to do good- I want to do well". When I was at Brown I expected to meet people like that, but they were all just Peace Corps/Teach-for-America-bound hippie idealists. Excellent writing, by the way.
» Zanzibar on 2013-02-24 12:26:19

I hope you become famous so more people will read your life story.
» randomjunk on 2013-02-24 07:11:48

I hope you become famous, but only after I read your book, so I can be pompous about reading it before it went mainstream. Good start. The first couple of paragraphs sound kind of disjointed, structurally, so maybe get into a writing spree then go back to those when you're already in the zone.

Zat is all good job goodbye
» Unicornasaurus on 2013-02-25 12:44:45

HEY WHERE'S THE UPDATE, PAL?
» Zanzibar on 2013-02-27 07:18:13

Wonderfully written Jon. I'm glad you're telling your story.

ryc: watch iiiiit.
» Amelie on 2013-03-01 11:29:48

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