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Make Yourself. | Dream Guy Monday. 8.15.05 10:26 pm His touch is as soft as a petal of a daisy The power of his fingertips always amaze me Warm embraces in his strong arms keep me still and calm In his caring heart, he knows he has mine in his palm With a touch of my hand, I grasp his full attention The mere presence of his eyes cures my apprehension The sincerity in his voice could make angels swoon With his brilliance brighter than the shine of the moon Precautious of my feelings, he sees them transparent And keeping me happy, he also deems apparent Not only with his eyes, he listens too with his ears Comforting me when I confide all of my deep fears The best friend and when needed is always there for me Rewarding me even more with his pure modesty My lost twin, indeed; I feel his pain as he feels mine A slight sense of his sadness is a knife to my spine He can feel my stares of great admiration from miles And will return the compliment with genuine smiles In spite of our flaws, our devotion binds us as one The journey of our precious love has only begun It's definitely not the best. It's corny and some parts are cliche'. I think it's one of those poems that seems good to me, because I know what I meant and how I felt. My store manager called me a moron, by the way. Bitch, huh? She's too old to be that unprofessional. I'm sick of people. I don't even give them reasons to be mean to me. *sigh* It's just me, myself and I. I want to start drawing again. 1 Comments. Your poems are so fucking good. You definitely have a flair, ever think of publishing? And just so you know, nothing's cliche if its real. Your poems seem very real, full of soul. And fuck your store manager. I can't believe she can get away with calling you a moron, which by the way, you are NOT. xoxox » juiCyy on 2005-08-16 11:34:36
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