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Tried to give you Summer,
But I'm Winter.
Wish I could make you Spring,
But I Fall so hard.

Make Yourself.


hilikus
Age. 38
Gender. Female
Ethnicity. Black
Location Wilmington, NC
School. Other
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Dream Guy
Monday. 8.15.05 10:26 pm
His touch is as soft as a petal of a daisy
The power of his fingertips always amaze me
Warm embraces in his strong arms keep me still and calm
In his caring heart, he knows he has mine in his palm

With a touch of my hand, I grasp his full attention
The mere presence of his eyes cures my apprehension
The sincerity in his voice could make angels swoon
With his brilliance brighter than the shine of the moon

Precautious of my feelings, he sees them transparent
And keeping me happy, he also deems apparent
Not only with his eyes, he listens too with his ears
Comforting me when I confide all of my deep fears

The best friend and when needed is always there for me
Rewarding me even more with his pure modesty
My lost twin, indeed; I feel his pain as he feels mine
A slight sense of his sadness is a knife to my spine

He can feel my stares of great admiration from miles
And will return the compliment with genuine smiles
In spite of our flaws, our devotion binds us as one
The journey of our precious love has only begun

It's definitely not the best. It's corny and some parts are cliche'. I think it's one of those poems that seems good to me, because I know what I meant and how I felt.

My store manager called me a moron, by the way. Bitch, huh? She's too old to be that unprofessional. I'm sick of people. I don't even give them reasons to be mean to me. *sigh*

It's just me, myself and I.

I want to start drawing again.
1 Comments.


Your poems are so fucking good. You definitely have a flair, ever think of publishing? And just so you know, nothing's cliche if its real. Your poems seem very real, full of soul. And fuck your store manager. I can't believe she can get away with calling you a moron, which by the way, you are NOT. xoxox
» juiCyy on 2005-08-16 11:34:36

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