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Profile Friends Chatbox | Original Sin, The Betrayal Thursday. 9.28.06 6:59 pm Many days had passed since Eve had materialised into existence by the almighty one. An enormous emotion had captured the hearts of the humans, love. Paradise was what it was designed to be everything, yet nothing important. The urge for a purpose overcame the couple. They wanted more, as every human eventually will. Wanting what they couldn't have, power, sickened by the concept of the "all knowing". The first Rebellion. God had only given them a single rule to obey; a necessity in which they had to abide by if not there would be consequences. The couple were not allowed to disturb a single tree of its natural belongings. The tree had been named Gaia. Strolling around the running rivers and blossoming flowers of paradise the couple had a single thought on their mind...Gaia. Eventually curiosity crept upon them and they made their way to the sacred tree. Crouching beneath Gaia, they observed it intently but could not find anything out of the ordinary. It was just like any other tree in Paradise so why did god favour this one? thought Adam. 'Because it holds the key to his eternal power, he's afraid that you may take it from him' whispered a voice into the couple's ears 'W-What was that Eve?' 'I have no idea' An unfamiliar animal uncoiled itself from Gaia's branches and flowed through the ground, moving like a stream of water. It was covered in glistening rock and through its mouth protruded a long pink tongue. 'Pick an apple they're delicious' 'But the lord told us not to' replied Eve, fearing the creature that used his powerful lingual ability so well. 'What he doesn't know won't hurt him' The creature speaks the truth thought Adam, Existence shouldn't be...there is no possible explanation...God isn't God...just a mistake 'Very well, I shall take a bite' agreed Eve, "After all he can't see everything at the same time.' Reaching into the branches she firmly grasped a ripe red apple. It was soft to the touch...something was wrong. Shrugging it off she split the apple from the leaf it had grown on. Eve placed the apple to her mouth and took a bite, nothing had happened. 'See I told you it was alright Adam.' 'Yeah, yeah, yeah' said Adam as he took the apple from Eve's palm. Quickly biting it a large aftershock occurred. Surging through the bodies of the couple was the wrath of god. It was the first time they had felt pain in their lifetime, to the couple it was both amazing and immensely stressful. 'I warned you not to disturb Gaia and you have turned your back onto thy master. The punishment you face is worse than the wrath of myself. For an eternity you shall live inside the thing you had reaped so carelessly from. Because of your ignorance your spawn and the spawn of your spawn shall suffer the same fate.' Still clenching the apple in his hand Adam let drops of tears flow from his eyes and unto his cheeks. A strange energy chorused through the couple's bodies as the world around them disappeared and reappeared in a totally different form. There were trees, rivers, animals and all sorts of life...but there was no god. 5 Comments. You're a good writer. :) I do have to point this out though; there is nothing anywhere in the bible that says the fruit was an apple. » randomjunk on 2006-09-28 07:45:25 True, but it didn't say what it was, you know what gave me the idea though, the male's adam's apple, geddit, it's symbolical » Nrgjester on 2006-09-28 07:51:11 Oh riiiiiiight. That makes sense... I wonder who thought of that in the first place?... » randomjunk on 2006-09-28 07:52:49 Well, Adam was a man and all men have the apple. Therefore, it's an Adam's apple. *crunch* Ahhhhh! » Silver-dot- on 2006-09-28 07:55:19 Silver... is your crunch directed at some guy's Adam's apple? :0 » randomjunk on 2006-09-28 09:04:55
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